1/15/2013

LUNA KING’S “HOTNESS OVERLOAD” TRILOGY: NOT EXACTLY FULLY-LOADED

RATING GUIDE:
 
5 – A keeper!   
4 – Very good
3 –  Passable
2 –  I’d rather read a telephone book
1 – An absolute bomb.  Read at your own risk!

 
Luna King’s “Hotness Overload” trilogy is the story of three pretty young women (Itchie, Suri and Meiko) whose bond with each other goes beyond the close friendship they share with each other.  They also share a fascination with gorgeous, chinky-eyed hunks, and this is what soon leads each of them to their real loves. 




In the first book, Sarang Hae, My Honey, Cosmetology student and Koreanovela addict Itchie has the hots for her half-Korean, half-Pinoy schoolmate Min Ho.  At first, Min Ho doesn’t pay much attention to her, until her bubbly personality and a series of “accidents” draw him to her.  Itchie is soon trapped in a dilemma.  Min Ho has fallen in love with her, but partly because of her “tiny” lie.  She has somehow led him to believe she has cancer.  Will she choose to tell the truth at the risk of losing the man she’s head over heels in love with?



The second book of the trilogy, Wo, Ai Ni, My Darling, is the story of Journalism student and part-time model Suri, whose unplanned act of concern towards Greyson, a gorgeous Tsinoy, leads to love.  All seems well, but then Suri is suddenly forced to choose between her love for Greyson and her loyalty to her childhood friend, Windale, who isn’t just suffering from his unrequited love for her, but is also sick and dying. 




The last book, Aishiteru, My Baby, is the story of Education major Meiko, whose fan-love for her idol, the famous Japanese actor-model Skylus, eventually turns into real love.  But is Meiko’s love doomed?  Apparently, Skylus is a cold-blooded, ambitious bastard who cares for nothing else except his career.

The Asian influence is impossible to overlook in this trilogy.  Everything seems to have come straight out of a Koreanovela or an anime series.  Based on her descriptions of her heroes, the boys look exactly like those K-Pop stars or those illustrated gorgeous men in anime series that many Pinays have been drooling over. 

If you’re into anything and everything singkit and pogi, then you might want to check out this series.  But if you’re looking for an enjoyable romantic read that has a little more than just cute guys and kilig moments, then this might not be it for you. 


Writing can be a very difficult job, and I do appreciate the time and effort that writers put into making their “babies” and sharing them with the public.  I also don’t want to be cruel, so let me just say that Luna’s series just wasn’t an enjoyable, satisfying reading experience. 

No doubt, Luna King has the ability to come up with the most creative names for characters.  I doubt if any of you out there have ever met someone named Skylus, for example.  Unfortunately, my impression is that she spent more time thinking of interesting names rather than crafting a story that truly stands out. 

The heroines are all cute and good-looking, but there’s nothing much I could glean from their characters that would make me empathize with them or fall in love with them.  Other than being cute, the characters seem flat.  The conflict in each of the stories don’t feel like conflict at all, but a surprising development.  It almost seems like Luna, while writing one of her stories, just thought, Oh,wait! I need to introduce conflict in the story.  Let me introduce one here right now before the story ends!

I was also bothered by the Luna’s strategy of repeating certain scenes in the series to emphasize the connection the characters had with each other.  To me, it was just a total waste of important head space.  I think the series would have been more enjoyable had Luna used her word count allotment to create fresh scenes that not only featured the interaction between the characters, but did something much more important like, say, advance the storyline or flesh out the characters.

In my opinion, there was just too much space devoted to the kilig moments that the other elements necessary in creating a good story suffered.  Each of the book in this series appears to follow this process:  (1) Describe the hottie; (2) Create lots of kilig; (3) Insert minor conflict to separate the hero and heroine; (4) Create a time lapse to show maturity; (5) Reunite the hero and heroine. 

While I do understand that a romance won’t really succeed if the hottie is, well … nottie … I would appreciate reading a romance with a little more heft, a little more substance.

I guess it’s the generation gap at work here.  I’d assume that Luna is still a very young writer, given these books.  Its elements are something that would appeal to the younger set, with her hunky heroes, who all seem to have been taken out of a Koreanovela, a K-Pop band, or an anime series.  It’s all cuteness and fluff, which, again, teenagers would love. 

Admittedly, my own teenage years are long gone.  I’m a grown-up now.  However, being an adult doesn’t mean I have forgotten all about young love, first love, and I don’t appreciate kilig moments.  Personally, I don’t have anything against hunky heroes, or cuteness and fluff.  I love light reading as well as heavy reading, but I need to find something memorable about them.  I still have the ability to squeal and squirm like a little girl if I come across some major kilig moments in a book or a movie.  But that’s if it’s wonderfully crafted. 

The problem in this series is, it doesn’t offer much other than pogi guys, cuteness and fluff.  They’re “safe” material, in the sense that there’s nothing here that would really offend anyone, therefore, it’s commercial and marketable.  But the problem with being too “safe” is, there’s a tendency to become run-of-the-mill and generic, and this is, unfortunately, my impression about this series.  “Safe” and “generic” are probably not the directions Luna might want to take if she wants to stand out in the romance genre and be remembered in the long run.

Like I said, my guess is that Luna is still a young writer, so I’m pretty sure she has ample time to improve at her craft and give other people (like me), not just her fans, something that’s worthy of being called “hotness overload”. 


RATING:  1




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